Her knuckle rap broke a spell
on ice glaze in a pail at the cabin door.
Then as if it were the signal for descent
a sixteen wedge of swans…
…brazen as Valkyries…
arrived from the north to claim residence
at that March pond wilderness.
Their five cubit wingspans
rasped currents in clear air…
though brassy throated honking
flawed white-shimmered elegance.
They…she and the swans…
existed easy at awareness edges
in that swan days progression
as she became a watcher…
watched their preening with unguents
drawn deep from dazzling feathers
watched their courting bustle on woody muskrat berms…
watched the intertwining of their mating thrash…
watched nests like floating barges
gently rocking eggs that broke to downy cygnets
watched promenades of pen…cygnets…cob…
as they paused to dabble pondweed…
wild celery…bluestem…brome.
Then one November morning pail water glazed,
and she watched…entranced…as swans ascended
lifting heavy bodies…earth free…magnificent.
Bonnie Marshall
You must live in paradise
Not paradise…just maxadaland where life us “just in your imagination” and anyone can live there 🙂
Your poetry is so sensuous. I love the sounds – and the gorgeous images.
We hope our writing connects with others…as your beautiful writing does on your fine site…so grateful thanks.
This is lovely, clear, finely observed and lyrical. Thanks for visiting me recently too!
I am just beginning to enjoy your poems, Simon. Thank you.
I reallly enjoyed this. I love swans and have spent much time sitting by a lake near my house where they gather. This line was gorgeous: watched nests like floating barges
gently rocking eggs that broke to downy cygnets
I’m sincerely glad you found maxadaland, Gabriela. Swans are fabulous creatures…how fortunate you are to live so near to them.
Holy fuck — sorry for the English. Not sorry for this poem: strong as Whitman, much more focussed and powerful. Oh, yes. And of course, the actual experience towers over the poem itself, which is the art bowing within itself. Sweet Jaysus, Bonnie: my goodness me!