This was part of it…
to preserve rare Mojave cacti
from destruction of the
gypsum blasting mines
to be mildly appreciative
when pros told her a Latin name
cylindropuntia enchinocarpa
for shimmering silver cholla
she’d arrive predawn
drink coffee, choose tools…trident rake,
an arrow pointed trowel…thick gloves
yet her intent was always other
just to be there watching
the skipping stoned trajectory
of desert big brown bats
in flight to roosts in distant caves
their tiny bellies tight
from a raiding night…
of bronze carapace beetles
blood engorged mosquitoes
and dew sipped from prickly pear
they stitched night to dawn
on those color striped horizons
of awareness levels to ease her
to supremacy of sun
when her intent revealed itself
to celebrate life in harshness…
with the drought adapted,
the self-protection poisonous,
the sharp pricked keep aways…
and so she gathered wisdom
to take with her
from true survivalists
Bonnie Marshall
…or a persona thereof
Artist: Tina Bluefield
Bonnie I thought this very enticing and eloquently said. Loved the brown bats. >KB
There’s something about flight that attracts me…birds, feathers, bats…even fish. Very glad you liked the poem and the bats. )
This is just like balm today. OK. I’m packed and ready… funny you should mention hunter gatherers. I was using it in my imagination to understand something. Love this
Simpatico. Pleasant travels, Jana. )
beautiful … ‘sipped from prickly pear’ – sublime
I’m especially glad you liked it. Thank you. )
Nice rippling pool of words!….
Simon (big smile)! Good…so good to know that.
A very beautiful poem, vibrant with gorgeous imagery. I loved the lines,’ they stitched night to dawn
on those color striped horizons
of awareness levels to ease her
to supremacy of sun’
Thanks for sharing. Please find time to read and comment on my poem on my blog, Rain-Chimes~My Poetry Blog, http://drsmitasriwas280.wordpress.com/
“Rain Chimes…” sounds beautiful and I look forward to visiting.) I very much appreciate your specific comment.